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[spilou]

Merci, ça m'a pris l'apres midi, mais jsuis assez fier au final
Au fait, il y a déjà quelque chose d'autre de traduit en Allemand?
Vu que j'ai le temps en ce moment faut en profiter...

[Mattamore]

non rien n'est encore traduit en allemand pour le moment

[Totoradio]

J'ai commencé une vraie traduction, voici le début:

Posted on a hill, I was anxious, watching out for the great battle preparation down in the plain.
Spartans, Athenians. Since I was a child, these people are associated with war, mutual hate and destruction.

What is the cause of this confrontation? I can’t tell. No one knows it anymore. This war is raging for so long that even the ancients can’t remember its genesis. There are so many versions, so many stories. The most plausible is about twin brothers, separated at birth, fruit of the one night carnal passion between King Aegeus and Aphrodite, the love goddess. The first one was put in a family from the Athenian aristocracy, whereas the second one was raised by the Spartan King.

La suite arrive bientôt.
N'hésitez pas à faire des remarques.

[yoga07]

Pour l'allemand , j'y ai passé le dimanche mais comme c'est un récit historique, laissez moi le mettre en forme.

Je n'ai pas le "sz"  sur mon clavier mais il est fréquemment remplacé pr le "ss".

A demain.

[Mattamore]

Coucou yoga, pour faire le "sz" sur un clavier non allemand, il suffit d'appuyer "alt" et de faire au pavé numérique le nombre "225".
P'tit test pour voir : ß

héhé

Merci pour ta contribution

[yoga07]

Merci Matt !

C'était tellement plus rapide de mettre "dass"  par exemple, plutôt que de changer de clavier.

Je ne me suis jamais posé la question d'autant plus que j'ai commencé sur un clavier qwerty.

Merci pour le "daß".

Par contre, je sais bien lire le gothique mais je n'ai pas encore un clavier adéquat et je ne sais pas l'écrire ! lol !

[leblond]

bonjour à tous.

wouhhhh... c'est mon premier post, je me sens tout chose...

Je me permet d'y aller aussi de ma critique sur la première traduction proposée, elle n'a tout simplement aucun sens...

Voici ce que je vous propose. Quelques tournures ont été changées par rapport au texte original :

"Posted on the Hill, I was anxiously watching for the preparation of the great forthcoming battle on the downhill. Spartans, Athenians… Ever since I’m a chid, these two nations have always been associated in my mind with war, mutual hatred and destruction.

What caused this confrontation? I cannot tell. Besides, I don’t think anybody can. War has been wild   for so long now, that even the Elders cannot remember its genesis. There are so many rumours, so many stories… The most likely to be true bring into play twin brothers, split when they were born, seeds of a loving affair between King Aegeus and the goddess of Love, Aphrodite. One was sent in a family of the high Athenian aristocracy, while the other one was raised by the Spartan king.

Eris, Goddess of discord, caused confusion on these two young boys, leading to a mutual aversion, and finally, to the deepest hatred. When Aegeus died, his two grown child were claiming the holding of many islands which were supposed to be under the control of their father.

Soon, everyone rallied to their respective prince, and went to war. The Islands, known to be prosperous, became a giant battlefield and every bit of earth was prone to a fight. There were fighting in the fields, the hills, the desert and even on the sea. The peasants had no other choice than running for their lives or for the fear of seeing their lands wrecked.

Thanks to the Gods, I’ve always managed to avoid these bloody battles. But on that day, I was filled with an inexplicable fear. War had finally reached the little island where I was living on, and I will soon be compelled to run from my territory.
“When will it stop? I hailed, in a raging scream toward the sky. Shall we wait for the sea to be filled with the blood of our people? Shall we sacrifice our civilisation only to own some futile islands?”

From the sky up above me, no answers were revealed. From the lands on the other hand, came a whisper. Very quiet at first, but growing in intensity at every second. There it was. The battle had begun. From my observation point, I could see the fury in the eyes of each troop. Pure hatred. Too petrified to move a muscle, I saw the Gods enjoying the show offered by these warriors. Death was everywhere. Jumping from battle to battle, reaping every man standing in the way of an arrow, spear or javelin. Heads were popping, bodies were collapsing, and the battlefield became red. Red from the blood taken from these men which could have been good friends if none of this had happened. From the deepest of my guts, I felt rage growing inside of me. Boiling until I lost my sanity. It had to stop. So I ran down the hill, holding fiercely a stick, on which was hang one of my white shirts. Yes, it had to be the solution! They had to listen to me and stop this meaningless war which was ruining our people and killing them all. And then, I heard a hiss.
Now I’m dead, an arrow stabbed in the heart, many years from now.
War is still intense in the Aegean Islands, and on every one of these islands, is a landlord keeping up this fratricide conflict.
I should rest in peace now. The terrestrial business is none of my concern anymore. This madness should not be worrying me. Still, my soul in tormented.

Why did my only son have to join one of the two alliances?

You may find the answer by registering now!"

[Totoradio]

Excellent, leblond. Bravo, ça m'a l'air nickel

[yoga07]

Je me permets d'ouvrir un topic pour l'Allemand.

[leblond]

Excellent, leblond. Bravo, ça m'a l'air nickel

bah en fait, je suis pas encore totalement satisfait. certaines tournures me semblent un peu "légères".
et plus particulièrement celle çi : "The most likely to be true bring into play twin brothers". Je la trouve un peu lourde mais je vois pas mieux.
et je me demande aussi si dans cette phrase :  "reaping every man standing in the way of an arrow", le terme reaping ne montre peut être pas assez le fait d'être fauché par la mort. A priori, ça a du sens mais ya peut être mieux à trouver...

[Mattamore]

salut leblond Tu te présentes dans l'affiliation ?
Comme ça tu peux rendre le travail mis en forme pour gagner les saphirs
Tu seras le 1er a rendre une copie :]

[Totoradio]

bah en fait, je suis pas encore totalement satisfait. certaines tournures me semblent un peu "légères".
et plus particulièrement celle çi : "The most likely to be true bring into play twin brothers". Je la trouve un peu lourde mais je vois pas mieux.

"The most likely one involves twin brothers". ça pourrait le faire non?

[leblond]

salut leblond Tu te présentes dans l'affiliation ?
Comme ça tu peux rendre le travail mis en forme pour gagner les saphirs
Tu seras le 1er a rendre une copie :]

euh ouais pourquoi pas, mais il faut faire comment???